My Mother

Hey bloggers!~ It's Sally again! After getting praised and encouraged by Sindu, I decided to post another poem up. This one is from...I think gr.8? It was when we had to write a mother's day poem...I decided to post it as the original, even if there are some weirdly worded parts...enjoy~! (it's alittle embarassing though >< I was debating whether or not I should correct some parts or not...it sounds weird) Anyways, don't forget the constructive criticism please~~

My mother

You are a priceless treasure,
The greatest gift in life,
My guardian angel,
My daily sunrise,
And my light in this darkness filled life.

Your never-ending wisdom and understanding,
Your kindness, care and patience,
Will never be forgotten.

Oh what have I done.
I’m sorry, so sorry.
I can see now,
I’ve hurt you so much.
I broke your heart with my cruel words.

Always forgiving,
You give a reassuring smile.
Oh, how I wish,
I could take my words back.
But I know I’m wishing for the impossible.

So please try to forget,
My life’s biggest mistake.
Please know I never meant it.
And now I want to thank you,
For the millions of things you’ve done for me.

I want to thank you for guiding me through my troubles,
For healing my broken heart and my crying soul,
For changing my tears into smiles
For making my dreams come true,
And making me the person I am.

I wish I could give you a million wishes,
I wish I could do so many things for you,
I wish I could end your worries, your pain and your stress,
But that's impossible because I’m so powerless.
So please accept the only gift I can give,
My eternal, unwavering love for you.

Fading

Hello bloggers~!
This is Sally and I decided to post one of my poems up. I felt hesitant because Sindu's poems were so good. I couldn't get to reading all the poems from the other class but the ones that I've read were all good too! >.< Criticism is welcomed with open arms!~ Oh yes, I forgot to metion but this poem is a free verse. (even if it is really obvious)

Fading

She looks at the wilted rose,
as memories flood back.
Stars whispered their secrets,
as she danced under the moon.
She danced with the rain
and rested on the ground,
until the sun smiled and warmed her.
The wind was her guide,
her spirit was free.
She played with the trees,
they lifted her into the skies.
THEN
even the memories turn,
to a dull black and white.
She’s lost her touch with nature.
The stars don’t come out to play,
rain was always angry.
They shunned her,
and her once shining eyes
turned dull.
Fading, Fading, Fading
to a dark grey.
She’s lost, she wanders
with her empty eyes.
She’s all alone.
Her life that used to be colourful,
is now a dull grey.
She sighs and presses the rose
in her diary,
with the picture of the rose before.
She will cherish these memories,
forever.

You Annoy Me A Little

Hi this is Sindu and this is a sonnet that i created

You Annoy Me A Little

My baby darling oh so sweetly white
Sweet one you are so cute and innocent
At times you cry and flail with all your might
My heart just melts at your sweet rose-pink scent
You sleep soundly in your crib of gold
While I tuck you in so comfy and warm
You lovingly in my arms I enfold
To keep you safe and sound from any harm
Your chubby cheeks so peachy and rosy
Wanting the gentle touch of wrinkled hands
You feel like a newly made bright posy
Emerging from the tenderly cared land
With the years your charm will be eroding
Your delightfulness is now foreboding

Ice Pellets

This is Sindu and this is a Haiku that I created

Ice Pellets

On the cold window
the frosty orchestra plays
a wild,icy tune