Fading

Hello bloggers~!
This is Sally and I decided to post one of my poems up. I felt hesitant because Sindu's poems were so good. I couldn't get to reading all the poems from the other class but the ones that I've read were all good too! >.< Criticism is welcomed with open arms!~ Oh yes, I forgot to metion but this poem is a free verse. (even if it is really obvious)

Fading

She looks at the wilted rose,
as memories flood back.
Stars whispered their secrets,
as she danced under the moon.
She danced with the rain
and rested on the ground,
until the sun smiled and warmed her.
The wind was her guide,
her spirit was free.
She played with the trees,
they lifted her into the skies.
THEN
even the memories turn,
to a dull black and white.
She’s lost her touch with nature.
The stars don’t come out to play,
rain was always angry.
They shunned her,
and her once shining eyes
turned dull.
Fading, Fading, Fading
to a dark grey.
She’s lost, she wanders
with her empty eyes.
She’s all alone.
Her life that used to be colourful,
is now a dull grey.
She sighs and presses the rose
in her diary,
with the picture of the rose before.
She will cherish these memories,
forever.