This is Sindu and this is a Haiku that I created
Ice Pellets
On the cold window
the frosty orchestra plays
a wild,icy tune
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- ENG3U Student
- I am a student from Mr. G's ENG3U class and I really hate school! This is a place where I post poems that I like to read as well as my original work. Let me know what you think about me and the poetry you read by leaving. Remember, add insult to injury use destructive criticism only! username: matg@rogers.com password: english3u
2 comments:
I like how you wrote "the frosty orchestra".
I actually thought you were describing the frost forming on the windows.
It's nice and I like it alot.
keep posting~!
- Sally
Hey, cathy here!
i'm not sure if i'm technically allowed to post any comments, but i really miss this site after our time on it. plus i really love this poem... so what the heck!
like sally, i really like "the frosty orchestra" too. i also thought the orchestra was a metaphor for the frost forming on the windows... is it not?
if the orchestra IS a metaphor, then i liked how u elaborated on it by describing the frost patterns as "wild" and "icy". i also liked how u used "icy" to describe the "tune". although the reader knows it is the music you're relating to, we immediately get a sense of the coldness of the frost.
great work and i hope ur class will have as much fun as my class did! :D
-cathy
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