The Dolphins' Way,
In Me Aspirations of the living
sea The dolphins do move within me The aura of
their soul, I feel deep down To be in the water
and not on ground Sifting through the
ocean, an expressing show Communi-
cation of a song and a blow Pro-
tecting even those not of their
kind They ask nothing in return,
they do not mind The most gracious
and unselfish of all that wander I
wish to swim with them, nothing could
be fonder The dolphins mean so much
to me, you see I need to thank them,
for showing us how to be
(Donovan 1997)
Rahul here,
This is a concrete poem about dolphins by Donovan in 1997.
I guess it doesnt work....
Friday, November 9, 2007
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3 comments:
Hey, Rahul! When you copy paste the poem it loses the formatting. You could try to recreate it.. but I guess that would be pretty difficult for a concrete. Is it supposed to be in the shape of a dolphin?
- Amal
haha, i was just about to say i didn't get the concreteness of this poem, but then i realized the copying and pasting... like amal said, you could try to recreate it. i'm sure it was really cool.
-cathy
Rahul,
We can't properly comment about this poem until it is reformatted.
You really should, as your classmates have mentioned, try to do something about the formatting.
-Mr. G
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