hey, Bagavathy here :D
i wrote this haiku, tell me what u think.
The Ocean
The calm, blue, ocean.
Beneath lies many treasures.
Waiting to be found.
Thanx
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2 comments:
I thinks it really good the syllable count is ok and its really catchy
-Rahul
Bagavathy,
This is a good haiku. I would alter the punctuation to read thusly:
The calm, blue ocean.
Beneath, lies many treasures
Waiting to be found.
Regards,
Mr. G
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