Wednesday, November 7, 2007

Darker Side of the Moon

Hey everyone, this is Vivek.
I hope i don't get sued for this, so I kind of edited the title of the poem. However, this is my own haiku dedicated to the awsome band Pink Floyd. If you haven't heard them, you have got to, because they create real poetry.

Darker Side of the Moon

Even the silver moon
- Enlightening the murky night
Boasts of a darker side

4 comments:

ENG3U Student said...

That is awsome man. Pink Floyd Rules! You create real poetry Vivek.

ENG3U Student said...

Dont worry Vivek they cant sue because you said "darker" and the albums called "the dark side of the moon".

but even if you had can people sue you for just writing a name of their work?

-Ielaf :)

ENG3U Student said...

Vivek,

You will not get sued. I believe I read this one somewhere before... I don't know if that dash was there the first time I read it though, is there any reasoning behind adding it? "Boasts" is new too if I recall correctly.

It's a good thing you didn't write a poem about a certain track called "Another Brick in the Wall"...

-Mr. G

ENG3U Student said...

Hey Vivek!!!
I love Pink Floyd too! I think your haiku captures the mellow and lyrical side of Pink Floyd very well. Rock on
-Charu