Monday, November 12, 2007

Hello!! I just have a quick question- can these be considered as poems?

1) I made this one up.--> Life is the flower in which love is the honey.

2) I got this somewhere.--> I'm a movement by myself, but I'm a force when we're together.

3) I got this one somewhere, also.--> Friendship is a single soul dwelling in two bodies.

4) I got this one somewhere, also.--> You raise me up, so I can stand on mountains.

ThAnKs,
~~~Bagavathy :D

5 comments:

ENG3U Student said...

Hey Bagavathy!

The last one (#4) can be considered an excerpt from a poem. I don't know if you know this but that line ("You raise me up; So I can stand on mountains") is actually a lyric from the song "You Raise Me Up" by Josh Groban, and since songs are considered poetry, this line can be considered poetry.

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~Caitlin~

ENG3U Student said...

Yeah, I guess they can be considered poetry, or in the very least...poetic
-Patty

ENG3U Student said...

Great! thanx Caitlin and Patty.
~~~Bagavathy :D

ENG3U Student said...

ooooo u got "you raise me up so i can stand on mountains" from my msn name right???

i'm very glad to have inspired you.

btw, i have "life is the flower in which love is the honey" on my fortune cookie application on facebook bagavathy...
-cathy

ENG3U Student said...

What do u mean Cathy? Someone read my mind and put my sentence into their fortune cookie?
Then again, I might think like someone else, or vice versa :D
Oh, yes, ur msn name did inspire me.

thanx
~~~Bagavathy :D